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Artemis
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PostSubject: Artemis Uchiha [Done]   Artemis Uchiha [Done] Icon_minitimeWed Oct 09, 2013 9:51 am

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The Basics!
Name: Artemis Uchiha
Birthday: 22nd October
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Element: Air
Appearance!
Height: 1.7m
Weight: 50kg
Hair Color: Brown
Hair Length: Long- Down to her breasts
Eye Color: Dark green
Skin Color: Caucasian
Body Type: Thin/Athletic
About You!
Personality:
Artemis is a hard working girl of the air nomads, having grown up in a rich family she has always felt like she needs to prove her worth by working hard to improve her bending skills. She has a big need for her parent's approval, as well as the elder monks, as she always thought they feel like she's been handed everything because of her family's wealth. She cares for people, wanting to help people in need, in allot of different ways, from giving them money to helping a shop owner being robbed. She loves to enter tournaments, where she can show people her ability with the air element and how hard she has worked. Aside from wanting to prove her worth through training and fighting, she has a great love for fighting itself, a strange thing for the air nomads, as they are known for being a more peaceful people.
Likes:
Artemis loves to train, she spends the majority of her time on trying to improve her airbending, as well as her speed through using airbending. She enjoys flying through the skies with her glider, it makes her feel free and relieves her stress as well. Fighting in tournaments is one of her favorite things to do, she can show off her ability with airbending as well as how her hard work has paid off.
Dislikes:
It pains Artemis to see people hurting, whether it is from a lack of food or money to someone getting attacked by a group of thieves, she doesn't want to see anyone suffer. She also dislikes cats, allot, mainly because she's allergic to them, but also because they're just not to her liking, she's more of a sky bison person than a cat person.
History:
Artemis was born into a rich family in Chokujou City, with her father landing in a big fortune before her birth. Her mother was very loving of her, though her father wasn't as loving as he wanted a son. They continued to live in the city until she was nine years old, her father was always away on "trips", with her and her mother being unaware that he was actually working for the "school" which kidnapped children to turn into their own personal military, she was too young and still inexperienced with her airbending which is why her father didn't take her to the school as well, though he planned to once she had gotten good at her airbending, the only thing that actually kept her alive. If she wasn't a bender, her father would have killed her long ago, as he basically didn't love her at all, still hating the fact that he had no son. She however was always trying to gain his approval, training hard to show him her ability with airbending, if she trained harder she would have gone to the school no doubt. With her father being pressed by the school for his daughter, he was forced to move to the Air Temple where they could hide for as long as possible. If they knew she wasn't great with her airbending, they would have killed her and taken back the money they gave him, and most likely kill him and his wife, her mother, as well. At the Air Temple, she had gotten training by a friend of her's, a great airbender, this was about six years ago when she was ten years old. Little did she know that her friend was actually a spy sent by the school to assure she was getting better at her bending so they could take her and brainwash her too. The school decided that it would be a waste to kill her, which is why they decided to send one of the best students they had to teach her, and turn her into a prodigy at the school later on. It was a year later that the school was destroyed by the rebellion, but the friend was still safe out of harms way with Artemis, unaware for a few weeks that the school was destroyed. Her father however heard of it not long after the school was destroyed, and was convince by her mother to keep her safe, which is why he kept a close eye on Artemis' friend. Once her friend heard of the event, she had decided to kill Artemis and her family, but her father was a Grandmaster at Airbending and protected Artemis, the first time in her life that she actually felt loved by her father, he killed her friend after a long battle with the master airbender. She spent the last five years training and just relaxing, flying around in the skies, something she loves to do. She grew closer to her father during these five years, and he taught her a few things in airbending as well.
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Houjin
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PostSubject: Re: Artemis Uchiha [Done]   Artemis Uchiha [Done] Icon_minitimeWed Oct 09, 2013 10:13 am

This looks good to me, overall. The only thing I see is that you're missing the space between dislikes and history. So long as your word counts check out, you'll be approved after you fix that. I can't currently do the count check or stamp the app, I'm posting from my phone at work.
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PostSubject: Re: Artemis Uchiha [Done]   Artemis Uchiha [Done] Icon_minitimeWed Oct 09, 2013 10:22 am

Fixed~ And all word counts are met
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PostSubject: Re: Artemis Uchiha [Done]   Artemis Uchiha [Done] Icon_minitimeWed Oct 09, 2013 11:31 am

Everything checks out.

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