Artemis Novice
Posts : 16 Join date : 2013-10-07
| Subject: Artemis Uchiha [Done] Wed Oct 09, 2013 9:51 am | |
| The Basics! Name: Artemis Uchiha Birthday: 22nd October Age: 16 Gender: Female Element: Air Appearance! Height: 1.7m Weight: 50kg Hair Color: Brown Hair Length: Long- Down to her breasts Eye Color: Dark green Skin Color: Caucasian Body Type: Thin/Athletic About You! Personality:Artemis is a hard working girl of the air nomads, having grown up in a rich family she has always felt like she needs to prove her worth by working hard to improve her bending skills. She has a big need for her parent's approval, as well as the elder monks, as she always thought they feel like she's been handed everything because of her family's wealth. She cares for people, wanting to help people in need, in allot of different ways, from giving them money to helping a shop owner being robbed. She loves to enter tournaments, where she can show people her ability with the air element and how hard she has worked. Aside from wanting to prove her worth through training and fighting, she has a great love for fighting itself, a strange thing for the air nomads, as they are known for being a more peaceful people. Likes:Artemis loves to train, she spends the majority of her time on trying to improve her airbending, as well as her speed through using airbending. She enjoys flying through the skies with her glider, it makes her feel free and relieves her stress as well. Fighting in tournaments is one of her favorite things to do, she can show off her ability with airbending as well as how her hard work has paid off. Dislikes:It pains Artemis to see people hurting, whether it is from a lack of food or money to someone getting attacked by a group of thieves, she doesn't want to see anyone suffer. She also dislikes cats, allot, mainly because she's allergic to them, but also because they're just not to her liking, she's more of a sky bison person than a cat person. History:Artemis was born into a rich family in Chokujou City, with her father landing in a big fortune before her birth. Her mother was very loving of her, though her father wasn't as loving as he wanted a son. They continued to live in the city until she was nine years old, her father was always away on "trips", with her and her mother being unaware that he was actually working for the "school" which kidnapped children to turn into their own personal military, she was too young and still inexperienced with her airbending which is why her father didn't take her to the school as well, though he planned to once she had gotten good at her airbending, the only thing that actually kept her alive. If she wasn't a bender, her father would have killed her long ago, as he basically didn't love her at all, still hating the fact that he had no son. She however was always trying to gain his approval, training hard to show him her ability with airbending, if she trained harder she would have gone to the school no doubt. With her father being pressed by the school for his daughter, he was forced to move to the Air Temple where they could hide for as long as possible. If they knew she wasn't great with her airbending, they would have killed her and taken back the money they gave him, and most likely kill him and his wife, her mother, as well. At the Air Temple, she had gotten training by a friend of her's, a great airbender, this was about six years ago when she was ten years old. Little did she know that her friend was actually a spy sent by the school to assure she was getting better at her bending so they could take her and brainwash her too. The school decided that it would be a waste to kill her, which is why they decided to send one of the best students they had to teach her, and turn her into a prodigy at the school later on. It was a year later that the school was destroyed by the rebellion, but the friend was still safe out of harms way with Artemis, unaware for a few weeks that the school was destroyed. Her father however heard of it not long after the school was destroyed, and was convince by her mother to keep her safe, which is why he kept a close eye on Artemis' friend. Once her friend heard of the event, she had decided to kill Artemis and her family, but her father was a Grandmaster at Airbending and protected Artemis, the first time in her life that she actually felt loved by her father, he killed her friend after a long battle with the master airbender. She spent the last five years training and just relaxing, flying around in the skies, something she loves to do. She grew closer to her father during these five years, and he taught her a few things in airbending as well. RP Sample:- Spoiler:
Ryuji had chosen to take his lightning bodies technique to the next level, with the recent topic in his head lately being the bijuu, he needed something quite big to even try and take on something their size. He also needed a big area to create and master a technique like thism which is why he chose to do it hereon the lightning mountains. He stood on the very top of the biggest mountain in the area, the area being cold, his breath visible in the atmosphere as he exhales slowly after taking a deep breath, calming his mind, he wore white clothes, warm to fit the scenery, with a white jacket and the cap over his head. "Lets begin" he thinks to himself, his hands moved to his chest, coming together as he quickly forms the clone hand sign, creating two clones in total with the multiple shadow clone technique, the funny, or rather strange thing about the hand sign was his pinkies being stretched outward, adding the clone explosion seal to the two clones, this wasnt really intended though it became instnctive for Ryuji to create his clones with the explosive seals. They knew their part in this very important training, first they had to help master the techniquem then fially testbit out by fighting the titan lightning body. The training had begun as the clnes and Ryuji focused their chakra together, adding lightning release into the technique, of course as it was needed foy a lighning body to be created. It was easier to train the technique as Ryuji already mastered the base technique; lightning bodies. The concept pf this technique was just to create a massive lightning body, the size of one of the bijuu themselves, the eigh tails Hachibi. Infront of the clones and Ryuji was the forming of the lightning body titan, first its shape was being formed, the humanoid being of lightning was becoming more clear and bigger, showing progress. "Keep it up" Ryuji said to the two clones, they nodded as they kept on feeding it chakra while Ryuji was keeimg it in form. Lightming shot through the sky as the area was being filled with intense lighning release. The clouds roared as the beast was almost complete, though they were far from done, what would be thepoint if Ryuji could oly create the titan with the help of clones? He needed to be able to create it on his own, without the help of anything or anyone. After a few minutes the beast was completed, it was quit large, lightning streaks could be seen around his body, much like a saiyan's super saiyan 2 form. Ryuji moved back, he knows that touching it could paralyze him in an instant. The clones then started with the second part of their objective, to attack the beast, they jumped into the air at the titan, when they reached s meter from him they had exploded as Ryuji jumped back and formed the ram hand sign. An explosion of 15 meters was released from their body, though the titan stood still, unharmed by the explosions, all itnhadnto shownwasna small movement backwards from the shockwaves it created. With the clones being destroyed, Ryuji gained their experience from the training, adding it to his own experience. Ryuji proceeded to restart the training to test out if he can donit on his own, cresting the hand signs needed to cretae thebtitan again. He focused his lightning release chakra again, in front of him was the titan being formed, quite faster than before, showing the clones' experience was indeed a big help, the reason why Ryuji always trains with clones, to fasten the process. It started growing into the intended size, rising higher with each passing secondn Ryuji kept feeding it more and more and more chackra while maintaining the shape formation, it took quite the concentration and energy, but Ryuji had to master this technique if he wanted to stand a chance against a tailed beast one day. After about two minutes, the titan was formed, but that took too long, so Ryuji had to start again to decrease the time for the technique to be complete to the minimum. He decided to use clones again, allot, their experience would do wonders for decreasing the time it takesfor the titan to be formed, a mistake Ryuji made with the last session, he should have continued to use clones. With ht eforming of the clone hand sign with its pinkies streched out, four clones formed next to Ryuji, two clones to his right and two clones to his left. The objective for these clogs was the same as the first two clones, first to create the titan as fast as possible, thrn to attack the titan when its complete. Currently there are two titans already, they would fight each other once the clones attacked the new titan, to try and shownthe truenpower which they held. The clones and Ryuji proceeded to create the hand sigms for the lightning bodies titan technique, in front of the was the forming of the lightning body titan, it was forming fast indeed, within five seconds it was completed. The three titans stood next to each other, and the clones jumped up at them while at the same time Ryuji jumped backwards to avoid getting hurt by the explosions. One of the clones held the ram sign as it, and the other clones, reached the titans. The clones exploded into a 15 meter radius once more, with a 3 meter radius aftershock following the explosion. The explosions caused little damage to the titans, as expected, then Ryuji decided it was time to have them fight each other. "Fight each other!" The chuunin yelled as he activated his Seirei technique and mived at blinding speeds towards the bottom of the mountain to avoid getting killed by accident. Immidiately the titans started attacking each other, causing havoc on the mountain wile Ryuji activated the Uingusu technique to fly away into the air with Sage Transformation wings. No even four seconds later, the mountain was destroyed with the titans still going at it, Ryuji was amazed and called off the titans to stop so thry wouldnt do anymore damage to the area, now he had to explain to the higher ups what happened to the area, they might think someome tried to attack Kumogakure or a tailed beast was in the area. So Ryuji had the titans disperse and geaded towards the village, he wouldnalso tell Ever about his new technique and hownit would help the village greatly.
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Houjin Grandmaster
Posts : 204 Join date : 2013-09-19
| Subject: Re: Artemis Uchiha [Done] Wed Oct 09, 2013 10:13 am | |
| This looks good to me, overall. The only thing I see is that you're missing the space between dislikes and history. So long as your word counts check out, you'll be approved after you fix that. I can't currently do the count check or stamp the app, I'm posting from my phone at work. | |
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